送交者: Enlighten 于 2005-12-28, 14:28:06:
回答: 老方的信，完全重写了第一段和最后一段，和改了些小错 由 xj 于 2005-12-28, 11:38:29:
remove the judgmental statement "accepting rumors and lies spread by the "environmentalists" as facts,"
Just point out the reporter being one-sided and let the readers decide.
The same applies to "Therefore, I suspect their appeal is merely a means of complicating the issue to mislead the public. "
Don't speculate on other people's intentions because you are very likely to be proven wrong. State the fact instead. If you have to say it, it's better to say "their appeal has no merit except complicating the issue and misleading the public."